Wednesday, October 05, 2005 06:45
today english exam , den the composition i write the question number 1 the one ending with i have to admit that appearances can be deceiving . hahas , wanna read ? i shall type it out for you all but first of all i want to " thank " him for giving me the experience for allowing me to write this composition .
- ORIGINAL -
life without you was tough . when i first had a break up with my stead , you came and console me and soon we like each other . before we stead , you told me that you will not be like him and instead much more better than he do . when soon all these became a lie . that was all just words from your mouth .
it started on a bright sunny afternoon . we were on a beach with a group of friends when suddenly your phone rang and it seems so urgent that you have to leave straight away . being a naive girl , i did not know what happen and soon , not long after that , we had some arguements .
being devoted to you , i forgive you whenever you had make mistakes . i could not bear it anymore when one day , i saw you with another girl , so close together . all i could do was to tell myself that it was not you . soon after the incident , i saw you again , with the same girl again and this time i had to believe that it was you . twice in a week , saw with my own eyes , i could not bear it anymore and decided to pretent i did not see anything before . i told myself what i see before was all illusion . our lives with each other soon begin to drift away . we started to neglect each other and finally , i decided to ask you out to solve the problem betwwen us . that day was a fine day .
" why are you so flirt ? " i asked . " what do you mean ? " he said . " i saw you twice in a week with the same girl so close together ! " i said . " we were just normal friends . " he said . " fine than , my fault " i said . " stop being unreasonable , will you ? " he asked . " i saw it with my own eyes and you said that i am being unreasonable ? " i said . " if that is the probelm than let us break ! " i said . i did not expect you to be so flirt when actually you had a kind heart and your appearance was so cute and handsome . form that day onwards , i have to admit that appearance can be deceving . ( 376 words )
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life without you was tough . when i first had a break up with my stead , you came and console me and soon , we like each other . before we stead , you told me that you will not be like him and instead much more better than he do . when soon all these became a lie . that was all just words from your mouth and not from your heart . you do not mean it .
it started on a bright sunny afternoon when we were on a beach with a group of friends when suddenly your phone rang and it seems so urgent that you have to leave straightaway . being a naive girl , i did not know what happen and soon , not long after that we had some arguements . being devoted to you , i forgive you whenever you had make mistakes even if it is a big one . i could not bear it anymore when one day , i saw you with another girl , so close together . all i could do was to tell myself that it was not you . soon after the incident , i saw you again , with the same girl again and this time i had to believe that it was you . twice in a week , saw with my own eyes , i could not bear it anymore and decided to pretent i did not see anything before . i told my self what i see before was all illusion . our lives with each othe soon begin to drift away , further and further apart . we stearted to neglect each other and finally , i decided to ask you out to solve the problem between us . that say was a fine day .
" why are you so flirt ? " i asked . " what do you mean ? " he said , acting blur . " i saw you twice in a week with the same girl so close together ! " i said . " we were just normal friends . " he said . "fine than , my fault " i said . " stop being unreasonable , will you ? " he asked . " i saw it with my own eyes and you say that i am being unreasonable ? " i said . " if that is the probelm than let us break ! " i said . i did not expect you to be so flirt when actually you had a kind heart and your appearance was so cute and handsome . from that day onwards , i have to admit that appearances can be deceiving .
tong hua gu shi li dou shi pian ren de . ni bu ke neng shi wo de wang zi . ni suo shuo guo de hua dou shi pian ren de . wo men de jie ju bu ke neng xiang tong hua gu shi li na me xing fu , na me kuai le . ( 452 words )
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* - JASMINE ' 07 ' 04102005 - *